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You can't use the apple loops on Newgrounds, dude.
But this sounds OK.

Picklode responds:

Oh, didn't now that. But thanks for your opinion.

Try to make the GarageBand loops LESS obvious.
Like, a LOT less obvious.
1:34 There's the Bright Techno Lead loop. I use it in my ringtone.
I don't know if you knew this, but the loops are a no-no here.

OtsenPie6 responds:

TYSM! I'll try to update it soon. ;)

It's such a good, chill melody. The whole thing is so relaxing and I just love it. The pad in the background works well too, and the piano complements it so well.
But the wobble bass is a little out of place. Why is that there?
Also I would have expected the drums to be a little lighter.

Awesome drumbeat! This whole song is just really good. My only complaint would be that the white noise has too much volume, but other than that it's really good.
Curious- what are the third party samples? Because I don't think you have to cite software instruments.

Delerium responds:

Thanks for the response! The Third Party Samples are the drums. The Hats are from a Metro Boomin Sample pack and the kicks and snares are from a Cymatics sample pack.
I'll tone down the white noise next time though.
Thanks!
~Delerium

Decent beginning, pretty weak middle and end.
Good job.

AliCatGD responds:

thanks I'll improve

The reason you can't upload WAV files is because NG uses a flash player to play songs, and WAV files sound completely terrible in flash players. WAV files are also GIGANTIC.
But about the song, the drums are placed in really weird locations and it's kind of directionless but the whole thing sounds GREAT for a cinematic track.

Senrekiv responds:

Hey GearWax,
Thanks for your response, good to know. Ye WAV is huge, we'd probably have overloaded newgrounds if it were allowed.

When you say, "locations" do you mean in your audio-space or in the meter? The hihats are a bit right-side dominant

Holy crap, this is amazing!
You need to work more on stuff like this....
BUUUT before you can use it in Geometry Dash you need to get verified by Robtop. And that rarely ever happens to anyone. Sorry.

DIOV responds:

Aww, Okay, lol I uploaded this to new grounds cause someone on my YouTube Channel "DIOV music" says that he wants to create a geometry level with this song, and he has my permission to do so, but I guess I'm just gonna have to hope robtop will verify it XD and thank you! have an good day :)

This is awesome!

MIXXED responds:

thank you for your support!

A bit of advice I could give is to make the drums louder than they are, and maybe use different instruments in the backgrounds. Also, this genre would fit better as Techno.

MiXXdUp responds:

Thanks! I'll incorporate this into the song. I appreciate the feedback. :)

This really reminds me of the song Adrift by Balderdact, which is one of my favorite songs on NG. It's super relaxing and just really good in general. The chords are especially good. The synth at 13 seconds is a little too punchy and doesn't really fit the mood but it's still great.

Lockyn responds:

glad you enjoyed my dude

rhythm gamer weird music maker. Formerly GearWax before transing

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